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Review:Ron 4 Hermione says:
This is for the Holiday Review Extravaganza Event Two!

Hey there! :)
This is an interesting idea because we know Aurors can work around the clock so it's not un-believable that they would have to work at Christmas. I'm not sure about Alice being there though, nothing in the book says that they knew it could be Neville because Voldermort jumped staraight to Harry but that's just my opinion.

I like the peacefullness of this, the fact that they are in the house and they fall asleep to be woken up by the husbands who have came home from work. There's something old fashioned, traditional about this but it's nice. It's not action packed and the face that, although it may be traditional in a way, the husbands going out to work and the wives staying home, it has a calming effect almost.

You've written this really well and I particually like the last line where you've wrote "Merry Christmas from the Potter family; both of them." I don't know why but something seems to stand out from there. Great job though! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your two amazingly sweet reviews! :) I have more coming, I promise, just with the backup in validation it's hectic. If you want to read more you can look at my fanfiction(.)net account: LivingDreaming4Eternity. I can keep up with them there. :)

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