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Review:batsoulini says:
Filler chapter. really good nontheless!

You escaped the cliche zone by not putting Sally-Anne together with the Golden Trio! Her bubbly personality matches way better with Lav and Parvatti!
Hermione seems quite annoying! That means you did a good job, since she was quite quite annoying through everyone's eyes outside! I think though, she'll create a friendship with Sally-Ann during Arithmacy ;)

Can't wait for more action and Harry Ron and Hermione get into the equation that involves Benjamin!

Author's Response: I'm not as familiar with Hogwarts-era fics as I am with Marauders, but I know making Sally-Anne part of a Golden Quartet would be a no-no. Besides, I have much better plans by making Sally-Anne friends with Lavender and Parvati.

Yay, I got Hermione right so far! Another reason Sally-Anne isn't close friends with the Trio is because I'm too worried about messing up their characters. I'm planning on taking baby steps with each of those three. And Arithmancy will definitely be very important here!

I've actually finished writing a basic outline for this story. I hope not to take too much time in between updates. Thank you so much for another review and I hope this story won't disappoint you!


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