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Review:Keira7794 says:
Awh!

You've created a character that just instantly warms your heart... like eggnog... though I've never tried it, I have to admit. :P Anyway, he's obviously nervous, but he's also inquisitive and there are parts of his character that is so Hermione and Ron!

Whilst I'm thinking of it, at one point you wrote '9 Slytherin. 10 Slytherin. 11 Gryffindor', when I think you mean '9 Slytherin. 10 Gryffindor. 11 Hufflepuff.' Just thought I'd mention it :) Oh! And this is a very small thing, but I noticed it in my friend's work yesterday (she's also French) and she ended a question with 'no?' i.e. 'What do you mean Iím Hugo Weasley and no matter what, I will still be, no?' - I've heard people use 'right?' instead more often, though I've no clue if it's a cultural thing at all. :P Just thought I 'd mention it as it felt slightly 'out' from his character. But, I'm tired, so please ignore me if I'm making no sense!

You've got me extremely intrigued into the 'music' - what is it?! Can anyone else hear the music? I can't wait to read how Hugo settles in and starts to make friends. I've a feeling he'll be playing the 'unlikely hero', and good on him - it's about time someone other than a Gryffindor got the herolight :P

Anyway, a great start to what sounds like a very intriguing story! Merry Christmas, Akussa! :)

Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad you like my Hugo! He's just an innocent eleven years old kid that has a bit of difficulties dealing with his insecurities.

Thanks for pointing this out, I'll check it out! And I agree, it's a cultural thing; or a direct translation maybe since this is how we ask the question in French, but I will change it now that I know it's wrong :)

It will take some time for Hugo to adjust fully but in his own time, he will and I'm just so happy that people seem to agress with my anti-hero type of character! Not only Gryffindors can be heros!

Thanks so much for this lovely review and Merry Christmas to you too :)



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