|Review:||Gabriella Hunter says:|
Hey, Cassie, guess who it is? Heheh. I would have gotten to this yesterday but I was bone tired and had boring grown up stuff to do. Anyway, so we're back with the girls and I have to say that I feel sorry for them, being stuck with Aunt Rowena. Its like, I don't know, being trapped in a room with a mean-tempered Umbridge. Not at all pleasant.
I do love Ettie though! She doesn't mince words, does she and I loved her actions during breakfast, she was really trying to annoy their aunt. I hoped it worked and good thinking on Dezzy's part for keeping Mistress Helga! I liked that you gave a bit more detail with her too and I'm able to see that having her dismissed really saddened the girls. Aunt Rowena, really? She'll turn them all into robots or something! D':
Also, I'm getting the feeling that things are going to heat up between Dezzy and Mr. Salazar (With his creepy eyes) and I enjoyed the way you detailed her infatuation for him. Lovely writing to show that her feelings for him are deepening and that she wants to be close to him even when they're apart. :D
Not sure if that's a GOOD thing though. Hm.
Anyway, I thought it was great that we got to see Godric again. I really like him, he's really laid back and I can sense that he's got some pride, maybe a little shyness about his cottage. Not sure if he wants to impress Dezzy or not but he's being really nice about listening to her problems. I'd forgotten that we hadn't seen him in a while but the fact that he wasn't impatient with Dezzy was great. Hopefully, they'll be some romance blooming...
But I'm just a hopeless romantic that way. :D
Great chapter all in all, there weren't any grammar issues and the pacing was excellent. And yet, I want more! Update for your stories and where's the latest chapter of LMT?! D':
Haha. On my end, expect A Force of Wills tomorrow (Hopefully) and Abandon is still up there for you. I'll be going back to Albus after A Force of Wills because Audrey isn't finished yet and it gets more reads and such.
Anyhoo, see you on the forums!
Author's Response: Hello Gabbie! It's so lovely that you left such an amazing (and long!!!) review for this chapter!
Aunt Rowena is quite the character, isn't she? I feel sorry for the girl being stuck in princess lessons with her! It wouldn't be fun at all, especially after they've grown up with Mistess Helga. I really love her character, and wanted to show that the girls love her, too. After all, she's with them nearly every day, and they've grown up being taught by her. And if she was friends with their mother, that would make her like a mother to them after the queen died.
And Dezy and Salazar... She's quite entranced by him, and I love that you're picking up on that! And his eyes. they're his most dominant and noticable feature, and I really have fun playing them up, especially because Dezzy notices them so often! and if it's good or not... Well, I'm not going to tell! Hehehe.
I love Godric and Dezzy's relationship, because it's very honest and very real. He likes her for who she is, not because she's a princess, and he is one of the first people that has felt that way about her. She can see that, and that's why she clings on to their friendship, and it means so much to her, especially because he's such a lovely guy! Hopefully LMT will be up before the queue closes for the holidays, and if not, I'll try and get a lot written so once it's open again I can update more frequently! And I'm going to read and review A Force of Wills as soon as I can!
Thank you so much for reviewing yet another chapter of mine! I really value your opinions, and love hearing from you! See you on forums!