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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Zayne I loved this oneshot! The characterization of Hannah is just amazing! I love that while she lived through the war, she also died in that war. I can see how it would be so hard to move on from the war after watching people that you knew so well die. The description in this was so beautiful and I do hope that one day she gets to dance among the clouds like she wishes to do. Adding Ernie in this was wonderful as well! I love how he is there for her, supports her, and without even saying anything, he just comes beside her to let her know that she's not alone. Even though it wasn't really said, in all the actions that you gave Ernie, you could tell that he really loved her and wished the best for her. My favorite line in all of this was this, "They had all known what they had signed up for, but they never really expected to die for it." That line is just so true! I mean, they are all so young that of course they aren't really going to think that they are going to die in this war, heck they are probably thinking the exact opposite! They all think they are going to make it through the war and that nobody will get hurt but of course thats not the way that war works, unfortunately good people die in wars. I really thought that this was a beautiful oneshot and while I never read the first one, I felt I was fine reading this one on its own! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Hey Erica!!

Thank you so much!!! I'm really happy that you like it, i'm always worried that these angsty sort of pieces will be disliked because they're boring or something. I'm really glad that you could connect with it though.

It's so true, i think that generation of kids could potentially end up really messed up because of their experiences. Their life sort of had to begin again and i don't think all of them would have known how to do that with the demons that haunted them. They their fellow students die and had to potentially aid in killing another human being themselves.

I'm glad you liked Ernie here, obviously, they didn't stick together and i think sometime in the future they do split because they remind each other of the war too much. *insert Neville comes in for the rescue* However, at this moment he's trying to be there for her, one day he'll see he can't fix her. :( I'm really glad you could feel his emotions and how hard he's trying here. :P

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate your kind words and i'm really glad you liked this! :P *tackles*

-zayne


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