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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hanna. YOU ARE A NAUGHTY AUTHOR. You get me SO into these people, like I'm ready to jump through the screen and force them to just be together already.

He's practically torturing her! I could absluetly feel her shiver down her spine and I wanted so bad for James to just realize it and not pull away and kiss her and ugh! She's giving you hints without even meaning to, James. GO FOR IT. Why must these characters be so frustrating??

Okay. I'm backing up a bit to try and leave a coherent review. I *really* liked seeing Gwen get ready, and I'm a pretty girly girl myself so I sort of wanted to go there and slap a nice revealing black dress on her :P

And now what do we have here... Kat kat kat. She shouldn't have let the anger get the best of her. Does she really think just a month or so of dating would get James to like her enough that she could try and tell him to choose? I'm so happy to see her gone.. but it's the kind of happy that I don't really think will last.. considering there are way more chapters and it can't really tie up this soon. So what else to you have up your sleeve, missy? ;)

Now this conversation with Hayden. I'm frustarted with both of them because, on one hand, James is so easy to see through. He's only telling Hayden the 'one day' thing because he knows that Gwen won't ever like him. But this does make me thing.. if he likes Gwen a lot, and he knows Hayden does, maybe that's why he's holding off? To be a good friend? But at the same time, am I keeping up my optimism too much by being so sure they have to love each other? Hmm. Sneaky characters.

I felt so bad for Gwen that she had to witness that. But I hope she also realizes that if one of her friends asked her, she'd deny liking James. He can very well be doing the same thing! Of course she doesn't realize this, it's Gwen.

I loved the little look into the past. So maybe if that never would have happened she'd have the courage to give it a go years ago. You're sending me over a roller coaster of emotions, Hanna!

I really enjoyed this chapter! It felt like it resolved a few things, or at least one blonde haired slimy thing, but it also felt like you're building us up again for something bigger...

Awesome story so far, darling ♥

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