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Review:True Author says:
Hello! I'm True Author with your requested review! =]

A very enjoyable chapter, I must say. :D This story takes grip of the reader's mind from the first line and continues to stay interesting. Dean, Seamus, Edie were quite good and funny, though I don't read humor in present tense; I don't know why. But still, I liked the way you wrote this. I did laugh at some places, especially when I was reading about his mum and pancakes. ;)

Well, but some parts still need to be improved. First of all you should make some parts of them believable; like your story significantly says that teenagers read Witch Weekly. It's for middle aged women or something like that, isn't it? Oh and just add some descriptions, but just a BIT. Okay? :)

Anyway, otherwise it was quite nice. =]

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I think I'm definitely going to put my little schpeel somewhere within the story about my take on WW being somewhat AU. A lot of people have brought it to my attention :) Also descriptions are something else that others have recently mentioned to me, so that's on my to-do list as well!

Thanks so much for the review, I really appreciate the constructive criticism!

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