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Review:CherryBoom says:
Hi! I'm here for the holiday review! =)

This is the first Pansy centred fic I've ever read, and it's really intriguing experience. I guess we often forget that there are always two sides in war, and the winners usually dictate the way history is written.

While I'm having some problems with Pansy at this point of fic, it's not really because of you, but more because HP books paint her in rather unsympathetic light. The idea of using classic antagonist as a main character is fun one, and I can see that she has plenty of room to grow as a character.

Her belief in pureblood society is amazingly confident. Then again, most often privileged people are the ones who have most difficulties to adjust their views, when times changes. She still has that mean streak that she has in canon, but you have cultivated more closer to being cruel and ignorant, which happen to be two character flaws I personally despise above all.

She's definitely in for a surprise when she wakes up. =P I was just wondering, that since she didn't see her parents when she returned to home, that there might be a possibility that her parents were in the battle. You don't tell us much of her parents yet, so one can only guess whether they are more passive or active supporters of Voldy.

This is really interesting start for a fic, and I'm glad I found it through holiday review thread. There were a couple of typos here and there, but nothing major. Your writing was enjoyable to read, and the idea is bit different from the mainstream, which is always plus. =)

Author's Response: Hello and welcome!

Don't worry- I think that I've only read one Pansy story myself. Reading stories about new characters is always interesing and I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

Haha- I was a little worried about the problems you mentioned until I finished the sentence. I definitely agree that she wasn't painted in the best of lights; rather, she was painted as rather stupid, vain and prejudiced. Not exactly the best characteristics to have.

Yes, Pansy will have to change (or at least) hide her opinions in the future. The changed society will not be sympathetic to them at all.

Her reaction to the surprise isn't pleasant. As for her parents, her mother will appear in the next chapter. For me, (spoiler alert... Not really) her father was an active Death Eater while her mother stayed at home in the manor.

I'm glad that you enjoyed the beginning chapter and I'm happy that you found it as well! :D


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