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Review:CherryBoom says:
Hi! I'm here for the holiday review! =)

It was fun to read about Roxanne Weasley for a change. I was actually expecting her to end up in Slytherin, since she had such a mischevious streak. I can just imagine how George's kids would cause a havoc in Hogwarts, since they have unlimited supply of Wizard Wheezes in their disposal.

Roxanne's character was quite well crafted. Clearly she's set out to break Fred's & George's record in amount of getting detentions (and probably howlers from her mother). I really liked that she had an inquisitive mind, but I can see how a kid like that could be quite exhausting for parents. Too bad we didn't get to see one of the ballads she had prepared for the sorting ceremony. =)

There were quite many typos in this chapter, so I recommend rereading it with a thought. Your writing was easy to read and very enjoyable, and it ended with a bang, or should I say with Ton-Tongue Toffee. =P

Author's Response: Hi! So sorry for the epically long time it took me to respond to this review :P

Yeah, i agree, there is so few stories of Roxanne and i'm glad you liked her. Slytherin? hehehe, that would have thrown George for a curveball :P I've always imagined Roxanne the one that would wreck havoc with a little help from Fred obviously as he'd be brains and wit behind her operations, otherwise she'd just spend all her time in detention as she too impulsive. I'm glad you liked her as a character and i am going through it and getting it beta read to clean it up so there isn't so many mistakes!

Thank you so much for your review and thoughts, i really appreciate it so much!!


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