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Review:justonemorefic says:
Hey Kristina :D I've been seeing more of your lovely banners around, totally missed that you're actually behind some of them!

Ooh, a mystery. I didn't expect that heading in, first with how she wakes up in a strange bed, but then there was something terribly creepy about it. Like the beginning of a horror film as she makes her way through the dark. This sentence - Humiliation due to the course of the previous evening - I noticed sounded awkward, maybe change it to something like 'The humiliation of the previous evening' or 'Humiliation from the previous evening' instead? There is some words that are repeated quite soon one after another, like 'night before' and 'thankful' are two that I caught, and I think reading it aloud will help catch those :)

The woman in her dream, I wonder how real she is - could be a memory or a metaphor. Aw, feel for her a bit more to know that the alcohol's for coping. I noticed that there is more telling than showing at times. For example it was so much easier for Austyn to ignore all the unpleasant parts of life, it would be better to show how she actually ignores the unpleasant parts of her. And I think you do start to show how she deals with something unpleasant right in this chapter - waking up in a strange bed! - so emphasizing how she ignores this unpleasant situation is one way of integrating that character trait without explicitly saying it.

Hope that's a bit of helpful feedback! It looks like an idea that's got a lot of possibilites ^__^

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