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Review:Harrypotterbookworm says:
Oh Marina. How you slay me so. You just .. maybe I shouldn't have read this when I was in such an emotional mood. Maybe that wasn't a good idea.

*deep breath*

You are very sly, you know. You know, you can tell that something is coming from the word go. At first I was confused, initially I thought he had cheated. But no, that wasn't it. I vaguely wish that it was. XP You know, and then death occurred to me, but then Fred didn't die, but then he did! Talk about false sense of security. That was so trippy. Just, props to that. *squee over*

The way that you address multiple issues in this story astounds me. The many types of grief, from his parents to his cousin and how that affected his many relationships. By showing how it affected Teddy thus affecting many other people, it gave the piece a much more rounded feel and made it .. better, to be blunt. Exploring the many different relationships provided perspective to the reader of how ... huge grief can be, and how it affects different people and such. You wrote it so well Marina, showing the differences between age and the different ways it affected people. Amazing.

I lovvveee how you slip the other story in through in italics, it was such an original way to do it and made it so mysterious. Also made me think, I had to flick back up for the last word of every excerpt to link them together I admit, I did get confused with the bits in between, flicking around so much. The scenes added to the story of course, but it took me a while to get used to it. I was in for more thinking then I originally thought for this story.

You describe things so beautifully m'dear. This is really a work of art. XD Oh and did I mention that Teddy is characterized so wonderfully human without seeming annoying? How you do it I just don't know.

Snuggles and love, Nikki.

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