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Review:CherryBoom says:
It was beautifully written. =) I could almost see the clock ticking on the background as Grindelwald ponders about the dilemma Dumbledore presents to him. While the actual action in this chapter was very limited and methodically controlled, it enhances sense of great minds battling while still keeping their distance from each other.

I can see why Dumbledore would try to avoid the meeting Gellert face to face as long as he can. Not only because then he would have to confront his former friend about his plans to change the world 'for the greater good', but also because then he would have to revisit his sister's death once again.

Their relationship is so complex in DH, that I would personally be intimitated to undertake such a challenge as to dissect it in fanfic. But I commend you for taking up the challenge and succeeding so well in it.

Your writing was enjoyable to read, and I was pleasantly surprised how well you managed to pace it, even when it was mostly Grindelwald's thoughts.

It was intriguing to read and I haven't read similar before. I'm definitely interested in reading more of it in the future. =)

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