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Review:AlexFan says:
Your chapter was kind of, all over the place. It was like you were trying to focus on too many things at once but you were darting from place to place trying to tell your readers everything.

You could've made the chapter longer by devoting maybe one or two or three or more paragraphs describing the setting and what was going on. Things wouldn't have seemed so rushed or messy.

Draco and Hermione sound very posh, Hermione has never referred to Ginny as Ginevra before, it seemed OOC to me. Good job on getting Ginny's name spelled right though, many people don't know the proper spelling.

Very little grammar mistakes and it was all in all a good chapter so congrats on that! It was really interesting to read.

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you for this unexpected review! This is one of the very first stories I wrote... ever. So thank you, I am actually REALLY surpised you found it, for it tends to get burried under all of the ScoRose stories here! But thank you so much again for reviewing! :)

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