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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
This is an interesting beginning!!

I like the idea of getting inside the Slytherin common room to see what really goes on. It seems like a pretty fun, original idea, from what I can tell. :)

The little twist with Daphne and Theodore was really interesting, but I do have one suggestion: Do you think you could try slipping Tracey's name in the part with her PoV? I was a bit confused when it switched from her to Theodore, because I didn't know her name yet.

And oh, by the way, I'm glad you've shipped your OC with Nott rather than Draco. He kind of gets old, and Nott isn't really explored much.

Awesome beginning!!

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: Original, YAY! That just makes my day! Its always awesome to have someone say that they think your story is original! Yeah I've had a few people mention that the change in pov was confusing so if I haven't already i will be going back in to add that to help. Tracey isn't so much an OC, she's a character that is on the list J.K flashed during an interview but is never mentioned in the series. This story is going to have a bunch of POVs and pairings so hopefully it wont get too confusing when it comes down to it. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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