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Review:AlexFan says:
Go Melinda! I like Melinda, as a character, a lot. She's one of those characters that proves that you can love a boy all you want, but they should never become your life or the one the person that you depend on for more than anything.

Anyway, good job, I enjoyed the flashbacks and Albus seems like such a jerk! In other fanfictions, he's usually all cute and nice but he's really mean in this one. That was a compliment (of sorts) not an insult.

Author's Response: Thanks for your second review!! It was quite awesome of you to review TWICE in a row! :)

Because it was a breakup challenge, I had to make Albus a little rude. I wanted the change in both characters to be the reason they broke up, and I think I showed his mean side a little more than Melinda's bad side. :P

And don't worry, since I was aiming for him to be standoffish and rude, I definitely take it as a compliment!!

Thanks again for your review!


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