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Review:Ardeith says:
What?!? No Sneth for "several weeks"?!? When I saw about the queue closure, I thought it couldn't mean this story...surely you were a trusted author! Sob! I'd better be busy over the next "several weeks" (sob!) because then I won't miss Sneth so much.

Anyway... despite my extreme sorrow, I will try to leave a review...

Really enjoyed the beginning of the chapter...the Marauders all happy together made me smile. Even knowing what is coming for all of them ... And I continue to scrutinize all mentions of Peter to see if his betrayal is leaking through.

Please tell me Sev is not going to be so stupid as to break up with Beth for her safety!! Please don't let her allow him to do that.

And in answer to your question in your reply to my last review, I actually think it is pretty cool that they haven't even really kissed yet. I think the easier thing to do would be to make their relationship more conventional, but what you've written makes more sense in their anything but conventional circumstances, if that makes any sense...

Anyway, hope you have a good holiday and will look forward to more Sneth in the New Year!

Author's Response: I know! It's been eight months (as I just calculated) since I've gone so long without posting Sneth, and that was the break between when ITB finished and I started posting ITR. I am a trusted author, in fact, but this year the queue is closed for us, too. It's going to feel so weird -- it's been even LONGER since I've not posted anything, period!

I love writing the Marauders all happy together! ♥ Sarah mentioned it being more like the story in ITB, and looking back, it's weird to think how innocent that novel seemed, in comparison to this one. You know?

I cannot tell you what's in store for Severus and Beth. :3 There's a bit of plot twist and shout, as it were, and I'd hate to spoil it for you early! I'm honestly really glad that you like that they haven't kissed, though. It would have been easier to make them all romantic... but it would not have been in character for Snape at all, and even Beth's character (though my own) wouldn't have stood up to that very well. I think it makes much more sense to have them taking things glacially slow, and it's awesome to see you agree!

Have a good holiday and a happy New Year, Ardeith! ♥ Your reviews are invaluable to me, and I'm honored to have received them so steadily, and for so long. I'll see you back for chapter thirty-one in a couple of weeks!


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