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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Saw that you wanted an opinion on this on that thing we call the forums and I've hopped on by. I think this is a really well-written story, especially for a one-shot because I feel like I sometimes tend to rush a bit. But the gradual reveal of Roxanne was a good way to leave us wondering just which Weasley we were dealing with. I enjoyed her thought processes as well, coupled with her slight boredom at knowing everything about Hogwarts already. Of course, the slight nerves she had even while handing out sweets (I knew that wasn't going to end well, hahah) to the others was nicely detailed. It didn't feel overdone and I was able to grasp her emotions really well, so that was enjoyable and I loved the tidbits you give about her family. I could sense that things had changed slightly at Hogwarts (Hagrid, I'll miss your Care of Magical Creature's class! Haha) and her relatives along with it. But not quite so much of course, considering that she was handing out Tongue-Tongue-Toffee like a good little imp. Hehehe.
I'm a huge fan of George/Angelina by the way and its really nice to read another Roxanne Weasley story, even though this one was sadly, a one-shot. If you want or wanted, you could check out my story, "Abandon" on my author page because I think you said you hadn't read many Roxanne stories. This is just shameless promotion on my part so forgive me. Hahaha.
Anyway, I wish that you would make this into a whole story because I really liked it! :D
Hope to see you on the forums!
Here's a fat kitten!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hey! Sorry it's taken so long for me to respond to this! The holiday exchange made my reviews build up a little!

I'm really pleased that you got the sense of change here. I've always read next gen where many of the professors are in the same posts and it's always irritated me a little because some of them would have been OLD. Teachers could easily retire, die, or just move on to somewhere else and i doubt they'd be in one place forever. Anyway, enough of that little rant!

Thank you so much for your lovely comments about the story and that you liked how it all came together. I've become quite unhappy with the end half of the story for some reason but i'm happy that you could connect with it ;P

Thanks for the fat kitten, they are the best kind *snuggles it*

-zayne


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