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Review:weasleytwinlover2011 says:
Hmm...what I think...what do I think... Oh yeah right that's it I LOVE IT! This chapter was pure brilliance! First you made me laugh, then you made me sad (I don't like dead Fred- not at all! Everybody knows Percy was the Weasley who died NOT Fred...Fred is too awesome to be dead therefore he is not dead, got it? Sorry- I seem to be surviving anyway so don't worry! Ignore this bracket-ed part it's just me rambling) Anyways pink elephants, green dragon...what can I say? It's hilarious and it's sweet and I love the way you've written all the characters(George, Harry and Charlie especially!) and as usual you've got you well written original character Clara who I also love! So I thought I'd just ask about well um...well you're sort of Weasley hating but um yeah why do you hate all other Weasleys? Then again why not do something different, right? Anyways amazing chapter! I cannot wait to read on! Keep up the excellent work! Jenna :)

Author's Response: I know, originally I did have Fred in the story but he was being a bit selfish and hogging Hermione all to himself and George didn't like that so I axed him (Don't worry I'll do another story with both of them in soon).

Yeah Clara acts as the part of the brain that Hermione lacks - so she's there to keep her on track otherwise this story wouldn't have even begun.

I don't hate all the Weasleys. I don't like Ron, he's a very flawed character which isn't easy to dismiss because he isn't the hero. Also I don't get Hermione/Ron, realistically how would that work, they have like nothing in common and I know opposites attract but honestly she has more in common with sneering Draco than emotionally lacking Ron.

Also I dislike Ginny, in the books she just annoyed me. She was too whiney, then too clingy, then too everything else. With fan fiction it's a bit hit and miss, sometimes I read her as a good character and write her as one but most of the time I see her depicted as a bad character and I suppose that's rubbed off on me.

I have no problem with; Fred, George, Charlie, Bill or Mr. Weasley.

Percy is void because he's not there much.

Molly - meh. I love and hate her. She's the woman who in real life you'd avoid at all cost. I know she's a wonderful Mother etc. But could you imagine how awful she'd be if you were a prospective boyfriend/girlfriend or if she became your Mother-in-law. I don't imagine it would be good.

I could keep rambling about my dislike but I think this review is long enough.

I have been lax in posting, I was not going to post the next chapter until the story reached 100 reads. I might break my own rule :)

~Zyii

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