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Review:MargaretLane says:
Really like your opening to this story, particularly the description of Leo the caretaker.

*laughs* Roxanne is the youngest of the Weasley cousins in my next generation series too. I forgot it wasn't canon, reading this, because it fits with my idea of where she comes in the family.

I wonder how George reacted to having his son placed in Ravenclaw. *laughs*

Roxanne sounds like a Gryffindor to me anyway. *reads on to see where you've put her*

Did you mean "she'd renounce right now", rather than "she's renounce right now"?

Aw, that's kind of sad about Hagrid no longer being able to perform the gamekeeping duties. I guess it makes sense though.

Really good chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think the beginning was the strongest bit of this as well. I'm less happy with it as it goes on and i think i lost the thread of narrative and was just trying to finish it.

I'm glad it fit your canon, i've always thought that both of them might be a bit younger and that George wouldn't have married right away.

Haha, yeah right? I put him there because i always saw the twins as really clever individuals, clever and witty and i've always imagined Roxanne as the courageous mischievous one while Fred might be the one who has more the brains and have those genetics.

It always annoys me a little when Hogwarts teachers are still teaching at Hogwarts in Next Gen. Sure, some of them might be there but others might have left after the war, others might have died, retired, been fired or what have you as no one stays in a post forever. Anyway, i won't rant about that but i'm gad you felt it made sense.

Thanks for reviewing!! :P

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