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Review:Akussa says:
Hi!

I don't know the show this is based on but I do understand the idea behind it and I like it.

The flow of this chapter was great. I love this type of "straight to the point" narrative and you really pulled it off brilliantly. Scorpius' inside voice is funny and dramatic to the extreme (which I find hilarious) although it's far from the classic Slytherin type of character (and I like that as well, not cliche).

The plan itself is interesting and I can't wait to see how this will turn out for him. I like that he's really trying to organize this as much as possible, enlisting help along the way.
Molly's participation was interesting as well and I like that you didn't make her a perfect copy of her father although she is Head Girl and that's how her cousin see her...

Great work and a really intersting opening chapter!

Author's Response: aw thanks! I'm glad you're liking it so far! I tried to make it a very fluffy story so its good to hear the humor sounds good :)

Yeah, I was sick of Molly being the one left out all the time in other fan fictions and I decided to include her in this one :P

Thanks for the review, it really means a lot :)

-Amanda


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