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Review:LovlyRita says:
This is a great second chapter!

First of all, I was completely engrossed the entire time, a lot of times I review as I go but I was just sat reading the entire time! :)

I feel so bad for Hugo, he's so isolated from everything he's known and it's even worse that all the people in his class seemingly went to the same primary school. He clearly does very well in school, especially in herbology where he has some comfort level with the subject matter.

And he hasn't shown any signs of magic yet? Poor Hugo. I mean he has to be a wizard, he got his Hogwarts letter, right? Poor thing :( I feel so bad for him!

I love this idea of the Weasley family meeting in the room of requirement though, that's super unique and cool, and like a little part of all their parents that has been passed down. They really are a tightly knit family so it's cool to see them together, and again really cool of them to accept Hugo despite him being in another house.

Over all I thought this was very enjoyable. It flowed well and you get a good sense of how isolated poor little Hugo is. I hope things get better for him soon!

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Yep, Hugo is very, very alone and not that good at making friends on his own (it was usually Lily that did all of the talking!) so it will be somewhat difficult for him to make his place in this House.

The family meetings are so much fun to write. I just love the idea of them having a code of conduct and agreeing to keep things secret from their parents. It's something we had with my cousins when we were teenagers, just a protection so that no one would let anything slip out during family gatherings!! They aren't all best friends of course, but they tolerate each other and will help each other out.

Things will get better for Hugo at some point but reality is hitting him hard right now. Too much stress coming from different sides and he doesn't know how to cope yet.

Thanks again for the review, I'm really happy that you liked this chapter as well :)

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