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Review:justonemorefic says:
Oh yes, especially little blonde boys, Louis. Hee, already such a cute start, choosing favorites between sisters.

I really commend good writing of children, because it's so hard to get the innocence and humor right without sounding too silly. The pudding had been difficult to wash out of his hair and Maman had not been happy, but it was still a delicious pudding, and Louis still loved Dominique very much. There's something about his train of thought that is spot on xD Pudding! Delicious! Still loves Dominique!

Omg this totally reminds me of my childhood. My sister would make me do things, /me/ of course, so she doesn't have to do them. She supervises and insists they are good ideas for the good of the world. Also: Padma Patil's Particularly Powerful Powder Soap Alliterative win!

He tried to remember how many fingers twelve made, but he had forgotten. Wah, more cute :3

THE QUEST TO CLEAN THE CAT Heee, and it all comes to this. Oh dear, an old brush used to clean the toilets discarded on the floor OF COURSE IT WAS. Poor Mimi! Ah well, Victoire gets her due. More pudding for Louis and Dominique!

That was absolutely adorable! :D


Haha, I was never in your situation of being convinced by an older sibling to do something they didn't want to do. It was the other way around -- I gave the orders!

HEEE YOU NOTICED THE TOILET BRUSH QUOTE. Yes, of course it was. It had to. The laws of fanfiction are impossible to sway.

Thank you for this awesome review!

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