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Review:TenthWeasley says:
Hello! I meant to leave this review roughly ten minutes ago, but then I got called out of my room right as I finished reading the chapter. Isn't that always the way? So here I am now, typing up the review for you --it's rather ridiculous, how many times I checked yesterday and today to see if it had been posted yet! (And while I'm thinking about it, thank you so much for the dedication at the top!)

Ugh, Tom and Fee. ♥ Every chapter and I'm shipping them even more than I did in the previous one. I love, in a somewhat twisted way, how they both have such similar mindsets, similar goals -- even if those goals basically suck, if I may put it bluntly. They just seem really right for each other, and considering this is Lord Voldemort we're talking about, that's pretty huge. I know he can't really love, having been born under the influence of a love potion; I know he's more or less a sadist, and that anything he and Fee might have is doomed. But anyone who'll make a girl hot chocolate and patch up her hurts has some redeeming qualities, small as they might be.

Oh, Walburga. You are leading yourself into a dark hole, my friend, thinking those sorts of thoughts about alcohol. I think Fee's reasoning for not liking hospitals, though -- wow, that's so interesting. I'm loving all these little character details that are coming out! I want to know more about her past, and can't wait for it. Poor girl.

Snap. This Auror training partnership is either going to be a disaster (which I'm currently leaning towards) or a surprise, because Septimus and Fee both seem stubborn and set in their ways. I want to read more about it already! (I was happy to see Moody there too, by the way -- perfect little cameo for him, though I suspect he'll crop up again.)

I'm having such difficulties putting my thoughts into words. I just... you write so well! I can't think of another story I've followed recently where I've been so anxious to continue on. I want to know more about Fee, and her parents (and her not-so-dead mother), and her relationship with Tom, and her Auror training. I know I've kind of gushed about this story lately, but I honestly do love it, and cannot wait to read more of it! You're such a good writer, and I am making it my mission to make you remember, if only so you might satiate me with regular updates. :3

Honestly wonderful -- and now I'm sad again because I was so excited about this update, and now I've got to wait again! :D Please continue very soon! ♥

Author's Response: Thank you! As you'll know from my comments on the forums, the feels from your review were just so indescribable! I can't put into words how lovely it is to see your oh-so-enthusiastic reviews! :D (And I totally sympathize with that feeling. I'm always being asked to make cups of tea at crucial moments in my fanfictions. Grrr.)

Tom and Fee. Every chapter nearer, and I get more terrified of chapter six. :') I get what you mean, and I agree- those goals do suck, but if they didn't we wouldn't be talking about Tom Riddle. (Side note: the whole idea of Fee being Minister was from a mention in DH where it says Piers Thicknesse (I think) was Imperiused to be Minister so Voldemort wouldn't need to show himself in the open. That made me wonder: what if there had been someone on Voldemort's side, who worked for the Ministry and was voted Minister because of her history as a "respectable" Auror? Someone who he wouldn't need to spend time controlling, thus actually giving him greater control over the country- I hope that makes sense- and the public couldn't do anything because they voted for that Minister? Yeah. Fee stole that plunnie.)

I know they're doomed and self-destructive and toxic. But the plunnies that I have for Tom and Fee give ME a case of major feels and I'm the author, haha!

Yup, I wanted to explore Walburga's descent into a world of drink and despair. She is absolutely leading herself into a dark hole, and her own husband is helping push her along the way.

I have a chapter written about Fee's past, and another two at least planned, but I just don't know where to put them. I'm considering chapter seven, but I think that would be a form of torture for the readers after six. Strangely, though, as I think on it, they do share a similar theme.

Haha! I know how the Auror training will end, but I don't know if they'll part as friends or enemies. A little tidbit to keep you going until chapter five: Fee loves to play mind games with Septimus.

Moody was perfect because I didn't want Fee to be the only protegee, and he was roughly the same age without a confirmed DOB that I could find, so I was quite happy to put him there. (Another side note: how are you able to read my mind?!)

SNAP. It's so hard to be able to answer all of your lovely comments because *sigh* they're so lovely. YOU are an amazing author, so it's a honour to hear that you think I write well! Seriously, all of your compliments are killing me. I'm dying right now. I'm dead. And I will update as best as I can, I promise! Chapters five and six have been written, chapter seven (may be moved to later in the story) is written, and chapter eight (or seven if the original seven is moved) is a work in progress. Factor in my other WIP and my one-shots, and I'm hoping to actually finish the story while my readers are halfway through it. :D

Awww, don't be sad. You've got this lovely review response to cheer you up! ;) I will, will, will absolutely continue! ♥

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