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Review:LovlyRita says:
Hi there!

Well this was a very interesting story, I usually don't read a lot of stories about Percy but this was a good one :) It's sad to see that Percy still wasn't able to find the grove with his family even after the warm and that he feels that he is so estranged. I like Audrey though, she's bold and a nice antithesis to his angst.

There were a few little grammatical things I noticed in your chapter, but it wasn't too bad at all. there's a point where you talk about someone's rights, but you put an apostrophe before the s.

I really liked your description throughout here, I felt that his kind of depression jumped off the page here. It makes me hopeful for him, hopeful that he can find happiness with her and maybe find his family again.

Great chapter, I really enjoyed it :)

Author's Response: Hey!

Thank you for your kind words! Yes, Percy is still disconnected, but that is the whole point of the story, to get him to open up and live life.

Opps! Will definitely go through and fix those soon, thanks for letting me know!

Well, we will just have to wait and see what happens hey!

But thank you for your lovely review!
- Abhi

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