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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
Yayy, I haven't been able to read many Percy/Audrey stories! I'm writing a Percy/Audrey myself, so it's always interesting to read other ones and see different interpretations of Percy and how he might have met and fallen in love with Audrey.

I'm sad for him that he's still the black sheep of the family, even after returning for the Battle and doing the right thing in the end. His guilt about not being able to set things perfectly right with Fred, and not telling his brother how much he meant to him, made me feel really sorry for him. On the other hand, he doesn't recognize that the same fate could easily happen to George or Ron or Charlie or whoever, and Percy would feel exactly the same way because he's still disconnected from his family. So he should recognize that he's still taking them for granted. Maybe Audrey will help him heal the breach within his family. She has a spunky, vivacious personality, a vitality Percy is sorely lacking. She seems to be just the spark he needs to start caring again!

Since Ministry work doesn't seem to be making Percy happy, I hope he finds his true calling. Maybe he should run off to a tropical island somewhere and find himself or something.

Flirting Percy is so cute. ♥

Author's Response: Hey!

It certainly is interesting to read other peoples views and perceptions of him!

Im actually glad to know that you feel that way! That is the feeling that I want the reader to feel about him, as the entire story is about self discovery and realisation. Soon, hopefully, he will stop taking them for granted, but for now, he has to kind of walloe in self pity for a while.

I know I'm horrible, but its all for the means of character development.

Yes, Audrey is the life of the party, and lets hope that she can turn Percy around!

Tropical island huh? That's a thought. Might actually do that, sometime down the line. Go to Fiji or something. Man, I wish I was on holiday.

Hehe, he is really adorable, given that he actually doesn't have that much experience with girls. But don't worry, his inner prince charming will rise to the surface soon ;)

Thanks for the lovely review!
- Abhi


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