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Review:Keira7794 says:
I really enjoyed this! It's so rare to see a story from a Muggle's point of view - especially a Muggle who saw a Death Eater attack.

I think you portrayed your main characters fear and confusion very well; it was a believable reaction and made the story that much better. Her mother also played a maternal part very well. :) The Death eater was all round terrifying, and I LOVED how you brought Malfoy into this.

I'm not usually a fan of the whole 'Malfoy is a good guy' storyline, but I really think you showed an interesting side of his character. There was one line that stuck out from the text,
"Can't we live in peace?"
I just felt that it didn't feel right within the text, and slightly distracted from the story. But, other than that I really enjoyed it.

Great job! Keira :)

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