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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
My mind is going in crazy directions, trying to figure out who the director could possibly be. Brown hair, brown eyes... It could be anyone! A school-mate of Harry's. The son of a Death Eater. Someone who lost a family member in the Battle. Someone who was simply jealous of Harry. Someone who had been a friend of Harry's and then became disillusioned. The possibilities are endless!

I can't wait to find out who it is, and what Harry did to this person. The virus sounds so intriguing. Your descriptions of Cassandra, the sterile lab, and the experiment really left me wanting more. I love stories that mix magic and science, because it opens so many doors to discover advancements in both fields, and merging them is a Frankenstein-like venture; by nature they do not go together, so forcing them together is bound to have repercussions. I want to learn more about this technology, and the prospect of putting magic under a microscope and doing things with it that can take away another person's magic. I'm wondering how they'll be able to take Harry's magic away from him. I get the feeling that Cassandra is somewhat disposable to this man, due to his cold attitude, so I don't have high hopes for her fate when and if he achieves what he's trying to do. People with a vendetta and lots of time to nurse that vendetta are a particular brand of terrifying.

I'm so glad I read this! It's going into my favorites.

Compelling first chapter!

Author's Response: Heya! Ugh, first of all, so sorry that I've taken forever to come and give you a response! I have no excuse over my laziness! :(

Second, you're close on the whole Director thing. CLOSE! But I'm not going to say on which one you are. But yes, the possibilities are completely endless.

I'm excited to tell you guys what is going on, how magic and science are coming together, who is behind all of this. Ah, so excited!!! The Director wants to take magic away from Harry because he knows how precious that its to him. He knows he's attached to it so by taking it away, the Director thinks that it'll make Harry suffer. Cassandra is.I'm not really sure what Cassie is to him, I know that she's going to play a big part but I'm not sure if it'll be for good or evil yet.

The Director has had a LONG, LONG time to nurse his vendetta. And by this point he wants revenge for what's been done.

Anyway, thank you for your kind words!!! Its reviews like these that make me all warm and fuzzy on the inside.

Until next time!


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