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Review:SexyDoorFrames says:
Hello. This was fantastic. I enjoyed it from start to finish. I loved it. It was really interesting to read and I was engrossed with it. I loved your style of writing here, it's interesting, almost detached in a way. It's beautiful.

I am interested in why their relationship ended. Molly is in some way relatable, because we all know how crappy it is when a relationship ends, but Molly has taken it a step further. I'm not sure what I think of Lysander, he left her but it's not your fault when someone takes it really badly I guess. You can feel her emotions throughout the piece. I liked her obsession with the word 'perfect'. It is understandable with the media being now it is right now that people want to be perfect so I can understand Molly's need for perfection.

This was just so beautiful. It's so haunting. Just wow. This happened to be on of my favourite lines; I tried to draw him into my dance but he held tight and pulled me away from the glass It was just so perfect.

Thanks for writing this, you're an excellent writer and I really enjoyed your work.

Author's Response: Hey SDF!

Thank you so much! It means so much to me to hear that you really enjoyed this.

Yes, it's very detached, i didn't initially intend for this to happen but as the story shaped and i got to know Molly it made sense why I was writing it like that. It fits who she was, kind of like she really isn't fully aware of how the world around her works.

I've had this question from a few reviewers and i'm not sure if i should leave it as it is or try and make this clearer. I never say explicitly why he left and a lot comes down to just he couldn't be who she wanted him to be. He couldn't fit into the plans she created for them. He couldn't be the perfect man or give her the perfect life. It might have been a little cold on his part but I think it came to the point where he couldn't put up with her anymore and couldn't pretend. I think the only hint i put in is where she's quoting back to him "am i perfect now Lysander?"

It's sad and i completely agree with you about how media twists people perceptions of themselves and what they should be. I think that definitely played a role with Molly and how she became obsessed with it to the point that she wouldn't have anything unless it was just that, perfect.

Thank you SO much for your lovely compliments, they made me grin so much!!


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