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Review:MargaretLane says:
The idea behind this sounds really amusing and typical of Rita Skeeter.

I think Hagrid's first name is spelled "Rebeus", not "Rebius".

I like the mention of her being as small as an eight year old. It gives us a picture of her, without overdoing the detail. I also like how naturally you included the mention of the necklace. It's hard to bring in something significant like that without having it sound contrived, but you did it really well.

It should be "it was my mother's" not "it was my mothers".

And you spelled Dumbledore as "Dumbledor".

Hmm, I wonder why he told Ollivander about her starting Hogwarts.

And that part about her setting his hair on fire is really amusing.

Hmm, there's clearly a mystery going on here, between the necklace and now Ollivander's reaction to her. Wonder what's going on.

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