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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
And it looks like I'm the first review!

Anyway, I loved this one-shot. It took me awhile to realise whom the narrator was, where he was, and what he was doing. I must applaud you for indirectly revealing such information gradually throughout the story, instead of stating it outright.

Your characterisation of Cedric was spot on. I had always wondered what was going through his head during the Triwizard Tournament, and your writing seemed to accurately capture one of the many possibilities. I loved the desperation in his voice when he was sprinting toward the cup, and also his anger toward Harry, who was after his girl.

The plot followed the third Triwizard Task and moved alon quickly. Your transitions were smooth and the events flowed flawlessly from one to the next. Additionally, I noticed no major spelling, grammar, or punctuation mistake.

Fantastic job!

Author's Response: Oh gosh :) Thank you so much!! This is such a lovely review! I was really worried about this but you have made me feel so much better. I really really appreciate it!!

Lauren


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