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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
Before I begin my review, I want to apologise for my tardiness. I've had a bit of a backup on my review threa. Anyway, here you go:

Firstly, I love your chapter image. It fits your chapter perfectly!

You did an excellent job with regards to your characterisation, especially of Walburga and Orion. They seemed to have a bit of an odd dynamic. I was a little confused as to if Orion truly loved Walburga, or if there was some other reason for their marriage.

The plot and flow were excellent. I must applaud you for your evidently extensive research. Most fanfiction writers just start writing, confident that they have retained every single fact from the books, and often have a multitude of inaccuracies. This chapter, on the other hand, seemed well-thought out and exceptionally accurate. You transitioned flawlessly from one event to the next, and jumping right into the action captured my attention immediately.

I just had one minor question after reading this chapter: when does it take place? Have they graduated Hogwarts? Or are they still in school?

Lovely job!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Oooh thank you! Yup, Nala's images are gorgeous! ♥

That's uncertain to everyone except Orion himself; hence Fee's thoughts about whether he might have motives. At the same time, Alphard does see in Orion a desire to get married, so the question of whether Orion loves Walburga would, I believe, be answered differently depending on which character you ask. ;)

Thank you for that; I did try to keep it as accurate as possible although I keep thinking something's going to go wrong, haha! :') Awww, my transition was flawless! Thank you so much! And I'm glad that this chapter captured your attention! :D

In the summary, I do mention that it has been two weeks, three days, seventeen hours and forty-two minutes since they've graduated Hogwarts. I don't have a particular date in mind but I'll say July 1945. (Technically, depending on when in July they graduated, it could be August but I much prefer July.)

Thank you! :)

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