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Review:IceCubism says:
Ah... Whenever I read this story, I feel like tearing my hair off in frustration at how superficial Tori is. That, and the fact that she has managed to get every single person in Hogwarts twirled around her sly little finger.

I truly, absolutely, 101% adore your writing. You're really talented at it and I love your plot.

That's why you can make all the characters so life-like. And for me to hate Tori as if she was a real person.

But, I mean, what on earth is Tori doing? She's toying with both James' and Albus' feelings. And the way she treats other people? It's like she thinks she's superior to all of them, the way she looks down at them all and think she's better than them. Okay, I think she actually believes that she's the best, most flawless and perfect person on earth.

And the way she treats Becky, her supposed best friend? She actually isn't sincere at all about her friendship with Becky, and she is so superficial that she actually dislikes it that Becky can be more beautiful than her. And the way she treats Lavender and Clementine so disdainfully?

Ohhkays, I'll stop my hate-filled rant right now about Tori. Honestly. I think I'm going insane.

But, anyways, I love your story so much!!! Eagerly anticipating the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!
I absolutely know we're you're coming from with Tori-after all, she is one of those characters you just love to hate-and because she is the one that is Missing, I think this adds another dynamic to the story-you don't know what to think about where she has gone, whether to feel sorry for her.
I'm really glad you like my writing! It means a lot, so thank you so much!
I hope you keep reading, and I'll get the next chapter out as soon as possible!

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