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Review:gingersnape says:
AHH THAT BANNER IT IS SO PRETTY! *runs off to read story now* *just had to say how pretty it is*

And... wow. Wow. This was. Wow. Such a painful life for everyone, but I think what hurt more was knowing that it's so common, and that you presented it so well.

This was so beautifully written. The beginning had me absolutely captivated, even though I didn't fully understand what Mary was doing then. As my understanding grew, so did my interest, but every time I learned something new, I thought I couldn't possibly be more drawn to something until the next piece came along.

I really liked how you split this into smaller pieces within the story, as built Mary's progression into a story of itself. The moments between heartbreaking scenes made it pull me in farther and yet let the pain of everyone involved sink in.

This was absolutely amazing and incredibly sad, but very very good.

Annie

Author's Response: Hi Annie! IT IS A LOVELY BANNER YES *drools over prettiness*

Alzheimer's/dementia is actually surprisingly common- I didn't realise until I was talking to a few relatives about it all.

To be honest, most of my knowledge comes form the film 'The Notebook' and I kinda filled in the rest myself :P So this probably isn't very scientifically correct to say the least.

Thank you so much for such a lovely review!
Annon x


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