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Review:imacullenpottergirl says:

This is by far the cutest and sweetest story I have ever read in my entire life. And i am not joking. I myself am writing a percy story, and so i've kind of grown attached to his character, so when I read this, I could not stop smiling. It was absolutely adorable!

The characterisation in this was just perfect, and you portrayed the characters, especially Molly very well. My favourite bit:

'But you, my love..." Molly kissed Percy's forehead. "You were just perfect for the arrangement. A valiant knight -"

"What's valiant?"

"Brave and courageous."'

Absolutely perfect. Again, this was such a sweet piece, and I loved reading it. Will definitely favourite it!

- Abhi

Author's Response: I know what you mean about Percy. I didn't care for him too much until I started writing him in my short story, and after that he really started to grow on me. Writing a young, endearing Percy was interesting to attempt because a lot of people go into Percy fics with their hate goggles on, but so far the response has been really positive! I had so much fun showing the love of a mother for her son, and the ingenuity it takes to console them sometimes.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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