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Review:momotwins says:
Hey sweetie! I feel silly (and repetitive) reviewing Memory Dust since you've already heard my thoughts on that story, so I'm reviewing this one! I always enjoy a Luna story, and I really enjoyed your take on her.

I also really liked your characterization of Dean. He does appear regularly in canon but we don't really have a strong sense of his personality, which makes him a lot more open to interpretation. I think you did really well with him. I like his wariness of Luna, cause she really is an odd duck, and I suspect after their imprisonment in Malfoy Manor, he would find her a little uncomfortable to be around. But they do share a bond from their time together, and Luna does love to make friends. She's very open in her affection. And her being raised wizard - extremely eccentric wizard at that - to Dean's sort of everyman Muggle upbringing, they're really sort of polar opposites. He just doesn't understand her. She is an odd duck, that's for sure.

Poor Luna, she wants to have faith in her dad and that he's okay. She's such an optimist. And poor Dean, I've always felt very sorry for him in the Deathly Hallows era. And he never knew his dad was a wizard too.

The kiss was super sweet XD I loved it. Dean is a doll for giving her her first kiss.

It's a really lovely story. I liked the simplicity of Dean and Luna's interactions at the battle, and that nothing else needed to be said about the kiss. They can just be, you know? He seems to get her better in that moment. Love it!

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