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Review:my_voice_rising says:
Hullo! I'm here from the review swap. :) Can I please just say that I love your banner? So gorgeous and simplistic!

Hahaha. I laughed out loud at your first chapter. I absolutely love Neville and I think you've captured him well; he definitely goes through one of the biggest transformations as the books go on and results in this kind of wry yet kindhearted person. He genuinely wants to help Rose feel better, all the while thinking about his beloved turkey sandwich. You're doing a great job with his characterisation, I can already tell from that one paragraph!

I love his reaction to Rose punching Scorpius in the face! So funny. I love her finishing his sentence for him three years later, and how things repeated themselves--except he wasn't cold when he sat on the floor XD

I also liked the repeat of how this time she was kissing him instead. Very cute ending indeed!

Author's Response: Thank you :) I really did try to capture Neville to the best of my ability! I read and reread his wikia page so many times, I almost have it off my heart!! :P Thank you so much for such a nice review :) Hee :) Fuzzyness :) And also, you told me to tell you when Chapter 3 of SBIH is posted, so consider yourself told :D Thank you again for all your help with that! :)

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