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Review:Remus says:
Hey Perelandra here from the forums! :D

I'm a big Ron/Hermione fan so this was the perfect story to choose from your stories! XD

The whole time I was reading this, I had a big smile across my face and in some moments it made me chuckle a bit. Ron's decision to buy Hermione the perfect gift was something I'm sure he would've thought of and even done. Within the first paragraph I knew that you had managed to get Ron's personality down.

She had a glass of orange juice levitating nearby and it was sloshing around...Mundungus Fletcher was hiding in the corner, his robe pockets stuffed with faulty cauldrons...there was a large squid bathing in the toilet, waving hello with one of his tentacles..."

^ I couldn't stop laughing with that one line! That happened to me once except that it was a talking toilet instead.

The entire story is brilliant. Of course he would procrastinate. Of course he would panic in the end. The end, though, that's what got me. I thought what Ron did for her was cute and it made me 'awww' at his idea but what Hermione thought it was...that just cracked me up! Poor Ron! I couldn't stop giggling throughout the entire story, really.

This was such a cute and fluffy story!! I loved it! Once I get some extra time, I'll be sure to read some of your other work! :)

--Rosie

Author's Response: My idea for Ron giving Hermione perfume was inspired by canon; In OotP, at Christmas, he really did give her perfume. She called it 'unusual'. So I took that and ran with it, and I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it!

A talking toilet, lol. I wonder what a toilet would say if it could talk. Probably nothing pleasant.

Ron's such a master procrastinator, and this is the one occasion where he can't depend on Hermione to do it for him. Seeing his thought process on such a thing was amusing for me to flesh out.

Aww, thank you for the wonderful compliments! If you do read something else of mine, I hope you like it. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing.


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