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Review:Remus says:
Heya! Perelandra here!

Thanks for being my 5th review! Haha, your story is the only Harry-centric that I read in that 5-review batch. Hahaha! XD

I'm not that big of a fan when it comes to Second POV as the authors tend to give way too much narrative that they lose the whole plot of the story. You, however, managed to not only move the story but also fill it with emotions which made me feel a bit sad for Harry/Ginny.

With such a short chapter you managed to really give us details in the emotions Ginny and Harry must have felt in those first few months they were apart. The loneliness, the wondering if the other one is alright and alive and the constant worry.

Question though, how comes Colin is there? He was in the run along with his brother so there's no way he could've been in the castle. It was too dangerous for him to go back to Hogwarts to begin with, specially with the Carrows. Anyway, just wondering, no biggie! XD

I absolutely love the last six lines by the way! It managed to capture their love for one another and their hopes.

This was a great read. Sorry the review is not that long but I really don't have that much to say except that I really enjoyed it!

--Rosie/Perelandra

Author's Response: Thank /you/ for being so nice as to offer to read stories for people like this! :) I've done this a couple of times -- and it's always nice, feeling like you've made someone's day, you know? This review definitely made mine, if you're curious!

I'm really glad you liked the second person point of view, too. It's actually one of my favorites to write (the other being third person limited, switching between points of view), and it's nice to hear that I made it work here! Emotions were certainly carrying this story hugely, and though I don't normally like Harry/Ginny... I think I can handle them when they're apart like this. ;)

Oh my goodness, you caught a HORRIBLE mistake of mine. Thank you for that! I've fixed it up a bit now; I totally forgot that Colin and Dennis don't come back to Hogwarts. And I'm very glad you did point that out, actually, because I'll need to remember that for future stories, I'm sure!

Again -- really, thank you so much for this review! And I don't even want to hear any apologies about the length of them. :D Any review, no matter the length, will always make me smile, and you've done just that. ♥ I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I hope to see you around soon!

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