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Review:Roots in Water says:
Hello! Your summary was so very intriguing and I'm very curious to see what this story will reveal.

Wow. I really enjoyed reading this story and I think that you have a really original plot idea. I've never read a story before from the point of view of a muggle during a Death Eater attack but it's a really curious topic to explore, since it would have happened a lot.

One of the things I like the most about this story is how plausible it is. Draco didn't want to torture anyone. He didn't enjoy being a Death Eater. But he wouldn't risk his neck overly much for muggles- if the opportunity hadn't arose, he probably wouldn't have done a thing to stop the torturing. The fact that he never sought her out afterwards further shows that he wasn't interested in becoming a hero or seeking contact with muggles.

But it's very interesting that because the opportunity arose and because he let her run away, the girl believes that he's a hero. It's also very interesting to see how once the veil is lifted just once, a muggle can begin to see magic everywhere. Intriguing...

It's actually kind of sad that everyone was obliviated, though it does make sense. It prevents more troubles from occurring, by keeping the Wizarding World a secret and protects the muggles from panicking over the more powerful witches and wizards. However, it's left this poor girl to struggle to comprehend that night by herself. If she tried to spread it around more, she probably would even be considered insane... Luckily, she didn't.

I noticed two typos as I was reading and I'll quickly point them out. To begin, with the phrase "even my wildest dreams could conjure" I believe you meant "couldn't", since you used "even". As well, with the phrase "ignoring he statement" you forgot the "r" at the end of "her".

All in all, I think that this was a very original and enjoyable read. Great work! :D

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