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Review:momotwins says:
I feel very vindicated getting to hear (so to speak) Harry say to a Dursley that they locked him in a closet and tormented him. Ha! Take that, jerkwads. And when Harry says it shouldn't have mattered if he was important for them to treat him right - yes! Yeah I'm totally doing a righteous anger fist-pump here. I have the urge to start cussing like Samuel L Jackson but I'll refrain, since only about 40% of his vocabulary is 12+.

So aside from the overwhelming feeling of "Take that!" that this gave me, which I greatly enjoyed, it's extremely well written. Now, I know that's not a surprise or anything because everything you write is extremely well written, but it always bears saying. I really enjoyed your characterization of Harry. He was very much book!Harry and not movie!Harry. Love that. And Dudley, his evolving world view that we began to see in Deathly Hallows really came out fully here. Nicely done. Just overall really great stuff. I noticed a missing period at the end of the "different choices than the ones his parents had made" sentence but aside from that, I got nothin', no concrit here. Sorry. You'll just have to cope with being awesome all-around. ;)

By the way, it took me a while to find a chapter of yours to review for the swap, since I've already reviewed most of your stuff. lol. But you are one of the authors on my favorite author list, and I only keep 10 on there so I really do think you rock, y'know. :)

Author's Response: Sorry it has taken me so long to get back to your review. I always love hearing from you.

Random side note: I now have a strange urge to watch Snakes on a Plane...

I tried to write this story several times, and Harry kept coming out super bitter, so hopefully that's tempered a bit here. It's definitely more book!Harry than movie!Harry (I always enjoyed book!Harry's fiestyness and snark :)).

I'll have to try to find time to write more so you'll have more things to read in the future. I'm really falling behind on that, but I really appreciate you taking the time to find a story that you hadn't already read. And thank you so much for all of your lovely comments.

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