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Review:LovlyRita says:
I was unsure whether to start this story because it's just so damned long, and yet i'd heard SO much about how amazing it, so I decided to give it a try :)

I really enjoyed this. I feel like you can totally tell that I don't read stories very often, I've never seen one where Rose lusts after Teddy. And even more hilariously, the fact that Scorpius is kind of a nerd! he's never a nerd! That just made this story even more awesome! I do like the fact that you have characterized him like that though. Too often he is an exact copy of his father, and it's refreshing to see him depicted like this.

I feel like, being the 55th review on this chapter that I'm not going to say anything at all that you haven't already heard. :P

I like Rose though, she's so real and likable, she could be your best friend. That's one of the hardest things about creating characters, is making someone that you can empathize with, someone you can see yourself hanging out with, and I think you've managed to do that in this first chapter.

I will admit, rather embarassingly, that I still get confused between all the different cousins and who belongs to who, so I don't know who Molly belongs to (but I'ma wikipedia that so don't worry.) But I really liked the relationship between the two of them.

It's also interesting to see the dynamic between Rose and Hugo, and maybe it's because I never had a brother but when I write them, I always kind of write them getting along, so it was a little sad to see them so hateful to each other, but that's most likely more real than the alternatives.

Over all a great start to a long and decorated story, and I look forward to seeing where you take things :)

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