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Review:hannnahgracr says:
Hey! It's hannnahgracr finally getting round to your requested review.

I've just read the first 2 chapters as well and I really enjoyed them. They set up the plot well, you didn't rush into it too quickly which was good. I like how you took the time to set up the characters first before developing the plot. Anyway onto this chapter...

I really love Edie, the narrative is fantastic. The humour through out the chapter is great.

The whole pub scene was brilliant, I feel it really allowed you to develop Edie. Bringing Viktor Krum into it was a great idea!

I love the characterisation of all your characters, Lisa seems a wee bit too perfect thought. But I suppose it emphasises the contrast between Edie's life and her's. She is a very likeable character though.

The ending has really made me want to read on!

Sorry that I couldn't think of any criticism, I really enjoyed this chapter!

Author's Response: Hi! Yeah, I know Lisa seems really unrealistic at times; I guess that's just meant to show how ridiculously lucky she is? I modeled her after my friend who is extremely beautiful, kind, used to be a professional ballerina, is engaged to the love of her life, traveled throughout europe for fun, lives out in the country in a beautiful house, just had a baby, etc. Her life is totally unreal, isn't it? ;D

Thank you so much for your review. :)

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