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Review:LovlyRita says:
Hi there!

This was a great start, you did a really fabulous job of capturing Hermione's emotions when she first saw Lavendar and Ron together. Ugh, Lavendar is so easy to hate, is she not? Even when I read her dialogue I had this quick feeling of revulsion like ..ew, it's Lavendar, she's icky :P You did a great job with it, I just don't like her :)

And Malfoy lingering in the shadows! So ominous, what the heck is he doing in there?

I really enjoyed this short chapter, it flowed well :) And Julia was your beta, holla! :D

ash

Author's Response: Slytherins for life thats for sure! I love having Julia as my beta she does such a fantastic job and is very supportive and helpful! I'm so glad you enjoyed this Ash! I'm trying to hard to keep it canon and its always nice when someone new comes along and starts reading this and enjoys it right away! yes Lavendar is very easy to hate, so dont worry i know exactly what you mean! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~

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