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Review:Siriusly89 says:
Hi there! Siriusly89 here from the review swap, paying you back for your lovely review :D

I love how the starting character's problem is her parents divorce! I'm just assuming this is set during the Wizarding War, and usually stories like this have stuff like 'my relatives are all going to die', which is perfectly fine (because it is a war!) but it is really different and refreshing to have a normal, everyday problem start off the shebang! I like how she acknowledges that maybe Theodore isn't the nicest of people, instead of her thinking that he is just perfect and wonderful in every way! SHE IS AN OUTSIDER! I love it! And her statement that the Gryffindors knew more about her roommates than her was a nice touch! I loved that line!

Okay, the paragraph I'm talking about now, deserves its own seperate paragraph. Your. Description. Of. The. Slytherins. How they don't go out of their way to protect each other, and how they aren't all lovey dovey and hugging each other every second, but that they still protect each other has just opened my eyes to a whole new side to Slytherin house. And I must now spend the entire evening musing over this new information. Because I am a bit guilty of stereotyping the poor old Slytherins, and now its a whole new ballgame. Mind blowing stuff, I'm telling you!

I almost missed the switch to Theodore's point of view! I only realised when he grabbed, or as I thought for a moment Tracey grabbed Daphne's hand, and I was a bit like 'so she's stealing Theodore's girlfriend to make him jealous? What?' I would suggest putting his name on the top of the paragraph,just to announce the change :)

AH! This story SERIOUSLY just got good! As you might be able to tell, I am writing a review AS I'm reading and seriously, this story's plot is GENIUS! Theodore, being the evil Slytherin that he is, is going to make Tracey fall in love with him (which might be easier said than done) to get back at Daphne, to cover for her being in love with Tracey! PURE GENIUS!

And yes, I have wrote a two thousand word review, but this is a Holiday review, so HAPPY EARLY CHRISTMAS :)

Author's Response: Wow your review has left me with no words! The fact that I was able to change your view of Slytherins with this is fantastic! I really want to show people a different side of this house, well my house on the forums! so for you to say that is just amazing! Yeah I didn't think to add in the part that tells you whose pov you are reading from so I will make sure to go back and change that! yes the whole Tracey/Theo/Daphne thing is very interesting, though I will say its not Tracey that Daphne is interested in! And if you continue reading, which i really hope that you do, you will find that this web gets even more complicated! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter! It really makes my day! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and leaving such a wonderful, awesome and long review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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