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Review:IloveNeville says:
This first chapter is so eloquently written. It just flows so nicely, and really has the same feel that the books have. I don't think I've ever come across a fanfiction that gives me that feeling. The way you introduced the characters was brilliant. You can really see that family dynamic, and it's as if Regulus really wants a relationship with his brother. So much so that he'll allow Sirius to walk all over him a bit. I could really feel the tension amongst the family whenever Sirius was in the room, but what you did great was you left it at that; just this constant tension looming over them, which I think is a whole lot stronger than a scene with lots of arguing and fighting. I can't tell you enough how much I love this story already.

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for coming by :)

Wow, that means a lot to me, so thank you! I'm so happy to hear that everything flowed well and you liked my characterization. There is definitely tension between Sirius and the others, but Regulus doesn't want to lose his brother, and I'm glad that was apparent. I'm so, so pleased that the drama didn't seem overdone and that you're liking the story :)

Thanks so much for this lovely review!

Amanda

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