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Review:Sarah says:
I have not been able to stop reading this story since I started it two days ago. It's really great so far, I like it a lot. I've been noticing a few areas where you're sentence structure gets confusing and where there are extra words that shouldn't be there, however, these are pretty easily overlooked. I am absolutely taken away by your writing. It is so wonderful. I just recommend taking a little more time to edit your work to make sure everything makes sense. Keep writing! I'm excited to read what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and I'm glad you like the story. Sorry you didn't like some of my writing. I always take a lot of time to edit my work, but when you work solidly on something for a month, sometimes you can't see the errors right infront of you. I tend to write it as it comes into my head or as I think Hermione will be thinking it, so it may seem like I'm rambling, which I know some of the time I am, but Hermione is pretty confused at parts in the story and so it may come out pretty confusing on the page. I always read and re- read my work so many times before I edit and I am currently going back and re- editing earlier chapters, so hopefully any mistakes you've noticed will be fixed.
Thanks for reading and hopefully you will like what it to come.

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