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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
So i came this way first for the review swap but also because TenthWeasley has told me that your writing is rather good to which I can say that it is! I really found this chapter to be absolutely wonderful and thought that you managed to capture the Black family really well! I also enjoyed the tone of voice that you've used in this and the wording, keeping it to be a slightly older time of writing really made this piece stand out. I loved the description in this as well! I'm so interested to find out what will happen next and how exactly Tom will come into play in this story. The green eyed monster is not a fun friend thats for sure and to have it over Tom Riddle makes it worse! I only hope that things can turn out ok for them all! The letter at the end also brings up questions, who wrote it and what exactly do they mean in the letter? I thought this was a great beginning! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Thank you for all those lovely compliments! :D

Oh, absolutely! Tom and Alphard really won't get along, especially as this is Tom Riddle we're talking about. ;) I'd love for things to turn out okay for them all, but unfortunately we all know how the canon ends up...

The letters will become more specific as the story goes on, and the author will remain anonymous for most of the story. I'm glad that you liked this beginning; I hope you enjoy the future chapters too! :D

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