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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
This is such a great beginning to your story! I love your characters, especially Alice and Frank! They have such a sweet relationship but I can only imagine how hard the news is going to be when they find out! I love that you are writing about cancer as I feel that topics like that aren't written about enough in fanfiction though I myself have two that mention it and one is the main character. I like the idea that St mungos will be adding in a mugglerated illness center though I can't believe that the doctors would just tell her to wait it out. This first chatper does a great job of catching your readers interest (or at least mine) as I now want to continue reading the story and find out more about your characters. In particular I want to find out more about Albus and Alices relationship! I think they sound like really sweet friends and would love to see more about them! I will have to keep my eyes out for more chapters! Great Job!


Author's Response: Aw thanks :) It seems like a lot of people like Frank and Alice!

I'm glad you're really interested... that's great to hear :) I've hit a bit of a tough spot with how to finish the 2nd chapter (and I've also been crazy busy) but hopefully I'll be able to get it out soon!

thank you for all the compliments and the review!


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