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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Very interesting story idea. I think the whole thing that emotions can be collected is a rather original and cool idea! I can already tell that things are going to happen in this story that are going to make me laugh out loud as I was already tempted to a few times in this one. It's interesting seeing other Potter/Weasley children being in Slytherin as I've only ever thought about Albus being in Slytherin, I thought that all the rest would still be in Gryffindor. Your MC seems rather interesting and I think that you have done a great job setting up her characterization along with Dom and Eve's. I think this first chapter does a great job of setting up your story and also leaving your readers interested in finding out what is going to happen next. I really want to know which other emotions they have to collect and if their idea does actually work and they can create love between two people. A very interesting idea! Geat Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Hehe yes it is a pretty out-there idea, and at first I was thinking how on earth am I supposed to write this with any hint of realism?! But I guess I just went for it ;D. It is meant to be largely humorous, yes, but hopefully not to a cliched extent! :p Hmm well considering we hardly know anything about the potter/weasley children in canon, I figured it was possible for them to be in any house. :)
Thank you for the review, it was lovely! :3


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