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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
Awww, this is such a sweet story! I haven't read many Seamus stories, but whenever I do I always find him to be a really charming, devilishly-sweet sort. Ava's perfect for him. :)

I liked Ava, babbler that she is, talking a mile a minute while poor Seamus is trying to propose! XD I really felt for Seamus there, not only vying for Ava's attention amidst the news of her new job and all the other stuff she wanted to ramble about, but meanwhile there is a guy Ava called 'hot' standing not too far away; it would make the extremely vulnerable act of proposing marriage even more nerve-wracking to have an audience like him, especially when he was so obviously into Ava. I did a little cheer when Ava said yes to Seamus and they kissed right then and there. I hope that nosy waiter saw it! Rude man, trying to interfere in true love.

And the way that he proposed, by positively screaming it, was so funny! He was so frustrated and Ava was just chattering on, and here he was with his life savings in his pocket, ready to confess his heart. ♥

I love fluffy stories, so this one really made me smile. :) I enjoyed it very much!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks for the awesome review! I'm all bright and shining and happy now!
There aren't a lot of Seamus stories out there, but he's always been one of my favourite characters, and I couldn't resist the chance to write him!
I also enjoyed writing Ava, so I'm glad you like her-and she is absolutely a babbler!
I'm so glad this story made you smile! Thanks again for the review.

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